by BlueJay
Let me start by saying the title felt old. I've read pieces with the same name so many times I cant even count. |
by Yrem Crish
You describe clearly your feeling in this poem..sweet and very romantic of you that everything you count on for your love..i like the way you describe in the first and second stanza something a "climax" they called that pulled the readers to be excited to read your poem...i really enjoy those parts..but, the ending is something not totally "took my hills up.."however you have a great potential and i really appreciate your poem..it is also great and amazing..keep always writing on and on..i may also is not a good one but just trying my best to write one..hehe...god bless:=) |
Haha, Thank You very much <3 |