by believeinlove87 Nov 12, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
new love
Walking along the river, |
This is a really good poem I find my self in the same shoes not knowing what to do. |
Even though it was a bit cliche in wording I think the emotional value out weighed that. Leaving the reader with a soft warm feeling. |
by L
Well, well. |
by Meme
Oh god Holly, this is so sweet. I loved how you used the third person all through the poem. The thoughts and words just flawed with an ease. It seems that they were really meant to be :) |
I love love love this poem it's amazing and wonderful and i relate in a way |