I love poems about eyes as they truly are magical and make you see into the depths of anyone's soul. I love how you start out here you feel lost and hopeless. But then your heart finds that one person and you melt into them. Love can make you feel safe and secure. And I love how you said you would live another day. You have a person you live for :). I love the sensual feelings you bring and the two lover's personalities. 5/5