Dear You

by Sunshine   Nov 13, 2011


Dear You

My emotions fell like arid sheets
with yellow labels of Autumn,
not the ginger season that I love,
but an unusual one with further
chills, and supplementary winds.

You weren't at the end of the phone
when it rained for the first time
over my land, this October,
nor when I was walking down
the streets being teased by
cold..no you weren't calling me
this time.

My supernatural love has lost
bits of Its paranormal charm
whenever a leaf of mine fell off
from the branch. No longer
held beats that seemed too
foreign, nor too strange
for the soldiers around my gates.

I at last disregarded the exceptional
spices that got me stuck for so long,
though I long for my remote home
that I've found inside your cold country,
but I am getting used to the warmth
this summer has held for me.

Just wanted to let you know
that I am homesick while letting go,
but wanted to let you know as well
that it wasn't that bad
to feel warm after all

Best Regards,
Your sweetie...

by: Rania Moallem

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  • 12 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    This<3

  • 13 years ago

    by Xionide

    Lol, im honoured :) you always did have a way with words nana. now to browse more of what you've written.

  • 13 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    I loved this thought it was really well written but i would like to say never judge all men by there worse decendents (noura haha)

    you have to kiss a few frogs to get your prince and a few bad to appreciate the good :)

    'My supernatural love has lost
    bits of Its paranormal charm
    whenever a leaf of mine fell off
    from the branch

    loved this 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Oh gosh, my babygirl is sad, Rania, all guys are a headache, let's do a collab cursing boys, I hate them. Lol.

    'My supernatural love has lost
    bits of Its paranormal charm
    whenever a leaf of mine fell off
    from the branch.'

    I know the 'i' in 'It' should not be capitalized however, I won't say a word because I know the site ain't letting you or anyone of us edit a thing, I loved the expressions so much like I had lots of thoughts about a 'supernatural' love. Many, many thoughts, no time to count them. I don't know what happened since we last talked but...if you want, we can talk about it although I don't give 'that' good advice, perhaps I'm not rational, lol, lots of my words make no sense but well, I'll listen with so much care believe me. :)

    Love this, so much, sunny lady. No votes left, I suck I know, I know, lol. :P 7bek.

  • 13 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    You know how I feel about this and how much it touched me. I've seen you love this guy with all your heart and seen you hurt, but in the end you must know it's okay to miss someone like this. He'll always be coming back to your life in ways you never imagined, in this case a dream, & you may miss him but it's perfectly normal to and with each time it will make you stronger, like Hellon said. He's a huge part of you and I know he will always be. A lovely piece, I adored all you expressed here. I have this unique connection to it that you know of, and with that I understand this piece quite well, like you've already said probably more than anyone else can. You will be seeing this on the nominations list when I get my votes. Beautifully done, keep your chin up, you know he'd love to see you smile, rather than be sad. (:

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