Wow! Intensely creepy but well thought out and written. I wonder what gave birth to this. Seems like an excerpt in a mystery novel. You have a striking imagination. This is awesome.

Wow... This... This is just wow. You blew me away with your imagination! From the first line I loved the poem, it really is incredibly deep and very well written. I honestly say this has to be one of my favorite poems, VERY well done!