Wow
A fantastic write diff and vivid and wow I loved it 5/5
Congratulations on the 200 mark with ur amazing poems girl :)

Death in her eyes,
blood running through her veins,
fiery anger taking control,
losing all sense of humanity,
she doesn't care anymore.

One year ago to this day,
walking into her house,
a complete blood bath,
laying on the floor, breathless,
lay her beloved parents & brother,
dead in her tracks,
she screams out
"I will get revenge."

I really love the whole poem, especially the first two parts,

The words show me what could really be the sweetest person who's had her life turned around because her family was murdered. It's amazing though - we say that we could never do something like that but if we were ever faced with the same situation and someone killed my family, I'd be pretty angry myself. Who knows what any of us would do,

An amazing poem, well written with a lot of emotion.

I felt anger reading the poem - felt angry that there are people out there who would do such a thing

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Holly, I like this much because you made me feel immense suspense and the growing tension between every two lines is just... enticing.

I really like the imagery :)

Wow... I think this is one of the best poems I've read by you.. It just...captured so much attention from me especially just from the title and as usual, dear, you didn't disappoint. That was just so powerful; the anger and hatred were so vivid, I actually felt like I was becoming the girl myself.
5/5

-Heather

Very emotional and tense. A great mystery type poem with conviction and determination.

Now we talking
i must answer this poem
It is not too late for revenge
I will take everything from you like you did
I will make you cry blood
Words of Forgiveness easy to say but hard to make the human inside me is Dead there is nothing more then hatred
There is no words call Forgiveness
This word for weak people
I seek for darkness and revenge
I hate fake people and those who just want to take not give
I closed my eyes from long time my goal exist only in the darkness
Everything is Chang i was living in pink world to think there is F-ship And people same the coins have 2 faces but now i will show you my real Face.....I Lose My self for darkness just to take my revenge ...
I will destroy everything beautiful in your life
I will make you see everything you love and closed to your heart is suffering
I will live my whole life Just to see you suffering