Yet again you have written a really good poem. All your work seems to be to a very high standard and this was no exception. I cannot fault you. The only tip I can give you is to keep on doing what you are doing.

5/5

Love this<3

going from how everything wasn't good to making sure you're holding on bcuz it isn't lost yet. Great job :)

5/5

A very touching poem you have a talent for reaching into someone heart and allowing us to see what you're saying, not just reading but feeling. A great write as always