Beautiful poem Miss Karla. You have a way of writing that you alone possess.

It's the first time on PnQ I read a piece with amazing flow and musicality. I'm really attached to it, and the maturity in your voice grows so loud in the readers' ears. You definitely penned this piece.
I'm gonna' nominate it, the next week.

And.. oh, the Sufis usage, post/pre-eternity.. were so clever and gave your piece so much thick volume. I LOVE IT!

Just evry word abed said is true..
And if this way u write ,i wil nvr quench my thirst of reading gud poetry ..
I dnt hv any votes left for weekly cntst ,bt nxt week..i am gonna nominate it..

Karla, this poem is beautiful. You have a way of creating vivid imagery, that makes the reader feel the passion from your words... I loved the stanzas where you said you were drinking his every word, and about his name rolling in your mouth... I loved your metaphors here! Amazing!

Great job :)