Very well written! For being a longer poem you did an excellent job and didn't skip a beat!! my favorite lines were |
This is a great poem i put you in my favorite authors tab.. keep up the great work. would love for you to read my poems and comment back. mine are short but quick to the point |
This is a great poem i put you in my favorite authors tab.. keep up the great work. would love for you to read my poems and comment back. mine are short but quick to the point |
by Paul Gondwe
'Dearest,do you remember me, coz i do' |
I have to agree with all the above. Excellent write vivid and intense. |
I thought this was an amazing piec some of the rhymes were not to unique and quite common but the way you worded each stranza totaly changed the effect ... very deep write keep penning |
by BlueJay
Wow this piece is amazing. Great job. Excellent job with description and imagery. The word choice is fantastic. 5/5 |
by Lioness
I really enjoyed this poem! |
by Im not broken anymore
Wow!!! :) |
by Pain
To be honest it is so great well done |
That was an amazing poem i felt every word which doesn't come from a good writer it comes from a great one |
by Im not broken anymore
Wow! This is a wonderful poem you did an amazing job!!! Absolutly perfect |
by Xionide
"The words have all gone blurry, |
by Wicked Ways
Dearest, do you remember me, |