Okay, that one....ended so...perfectly especially the way you tied in the title of the poem at the end, dear. I hope that you're okay, if you ever need me, just message me, hun. ;/ |
Okay, that one....ended so...perfectly especially the way you tied in the title of the poem at the end, dear. I hope that you're okay, if you ever need me, just message me, hun. ;/ |
Oopies... it submitted twice. o.o... Sorry... |
I am not impressed with cutting poems, maybe it's for lack of understanding the concept. But you did a good job in writing it. Nicely done |
Amazing girl love all ur poems <3 |
Wow, Holly this poem is so deep and filled with hurt... it really touched me... I love that the opening line was "One, two, three" and the the last stanza was a continuation "Four, five, six" ... it really added to the story you told in this poem. It was really sad, and the concept of cutting is horrible! (I really hope this isn't true) But I like that you talked about this hard subject, I know many people can relate to it. Great job with this poem hon! |