Loosely strapped onto your fate...

So beautiful imagery! I like dividing the poem regularly into four-line stanzas. This is really enticing. Brilliant as always.

A lovely love poem. ..i like how you created two different emotions. Its really a bad moment to find one in a feeling of remorse and sceptism after a tiny misunderstanding. It leaves ones in despair and wishing you where never together. Such are trying times when one shouldn't let emotions to take control of the affairs. It can result to bad judgements.

With patience, perseverance and trust. One can go through it all and find a point where the puzzle will fall together. Then, the love and affection will start blooming like never before. Its just a phase that strengthens and taste the amount of love one feels for the other. It can be minor or major depending on how you go about it.

Love is a mixture of happy and sad times, they complement each other, just as lovers. This is the reality of every relationship. And i believe everyone can find this relatable. Bon Travail! :) ..

Woooooooow this is amazing, i want nothing but to read it hundred of times. the comments above show how this poem is fantastic
excellent job 5/5

Beautiful poem i can relate to the poem i read it 3 times already & i suppose ill probably read it alot more times.a 5 Excellent

You wrote this really well and I found the read to be quite enjoyable. I loved your choice of words and how you put the poem together.

5/5