Comments : Blood And Ink Stained

  • 13 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Wow girl this is an amazing poem.

    The walls are covered in the last of her blood that was left,
    her body is lying lifeless on page that's so inked up with words,
    her arms left inked stained from the still wet words she wrote,
    the only thing that was left to say was that she loved him till this day.
    -this shows how much he hurt her, but still to the end of the day she loves him.

    I can see this playing out, her grabbing the razor and cutting till stitches. this flows perfectly & emotion is outstanding

    :)
    5/5