I love this alliteration!! Amazing. One of the best LTFR alliterations in Abby's contest.

Michael,

For some reason this poem puts a sense of peace in me. I love the fact that so much is said with so little words.

I can feel the sunshine beating upon my face, all the warmth and happiness of sitting peacefully in a field or something taking in the rays.

Wonderful!

I love this poem.

I read it and feel as if I am standing outside in the sun soaking up some rays (even though right now it is raining) it made me feel warm

I like the use of Aladdin's lamp and the word illuminating. Fit for this poem

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