How can i
by charlotte drury Nov 17, 2011
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How can i forget you when your always on my mind how can i not want you when your all i want inside how can i let you go when i cant see us apart how can i not love you when you control my heart |
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13 years ago
Thank you and yes will do :)
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13 years ago
I think you have a good poem going on here. But change up your format. Break it up, and add punctuation. It makes it flow easier and read better. Good job, excellent overall
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13 years ago
What ??
