by Salina Is Beautiful Nov 18, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I am stuck here in this cold world nothing to do but watch as my life withers away i cant stand the pain the emotions are everywhere and you are no where i try to be strong but yet i always fail im hanging by a thread i climb this rope but fall when i get close to the top these days are filled with nothing but nightmares all my dreams have haunted me i look in the mirrior and see this bleeding girl i take one more look and realize that girl........is me i keep falling as though no one can hear me calling for help its my time to bleed just please dont leave im only stuck in this cold world |
by Fear2love
Really sad but impressive poem |
Very good poem , sad in fact, well written, Keep up the good work. |
by Dan Mazurek
Your cold world can warm ones heart knowing that there are days we all feel what you just wrote ...your not alone so i pray this has brighten your day and warmth your soul. |
by Marvellous
The ignorance of what To Do, is mainly the reason(s) we call here, a Cold World, ..I suppose; even when I feel the heat, b/w yr splendid lines.. Much enjoyed the read! Keep mov'n forward.. |
by Georgia
Great sadly written poem ! |