by E Dacaf Nov 19, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Seething emotions spill forth from crevises long forgotten. |
by Lostlove1
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by Amreen
I too agree with the guys above... |
by Decayed
I think there is rawness all over, and the thick imagery used with the line breaks of one line between two stanzas just conveys the message in an eerie way, but 'eerie' is great, in here. |
This is amazing. I love how it tells a story that one could follow. I love the wording and the imagery. It's all around just a wonderful poem. Outstanding. |
by Paul Gondwe
I wonder why this poem hasnt gotten the attention it needs..this is a great piece..the wording is brilliant..if i had the powers, i would hav nominated this poem coz it is a winner..5/5 |