by Sylvia
I think you captured the thoughts of a politician and how they must feel with the power they receive when elected. They forget how and who elected them. |
This was absolutely brilliant. The contradicting lines are right on. I listen to campaigns and think we the ppl are really stupid to believe 99% of what is said, so we vote on personality. I won't go into my political views , no one wants to hear them but wow you nailed it. |
by Sherry Lynn
I must say that you have done a wonderful job. Penning this piece on politicians is absolutely brilliant. |
Nitin my man what an awesome write. You speak for the people in this, just how we feel about how they talk out the side of their mouths. Excellent bro |
by Exostosis
I am sword's peace |
by Meena Krish
Politicians all around are the same, they give out promises but never live up to them. Each verse you have penned, paints a perfect picture of a corrupt and deceiving politician. Excellent write! |
by Jyoti Rawat
Hye |
by ronel mccarthy
Excellent !great contrasts |
Wow this poem was amazing. I really felt it, and love how you wrote it. Your words were so powerful and you created brilliant imagery. I love the contradictions in your metaphors... |