Comments : Perfect Summer Day

  • 12 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    Very lovely poem and so vivid in mental pictures, could almost feel that first touch of sunshine on your skin. Loved it :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This was a pleasant read throughout, a lovely image to portray, sweet and serene

    I liked the rhymes and flow and the tone was gentle, a lovely piece
    xxxxx