Colours only rainbows could be proud of..this is my fav line..u hav unleashed ur full potential in this great piece..ur wording is true and the emotions r nicely presented...5/5

Imagery is immaculate in this piece, I can see it all so very clearly. I can feel all of the emotion you present. My gosh this piece is amazing!! I love it. It has been penned perfectly and it is going on my favorites list because it is so freaking amazing. 5/5 I hope to read much more of your work very soon