by Cinnamonspice Nov 20, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Total darkness but the small light |
by Liliana
Great job you two, I cannot say who wrote what and the choice of words was beautifully chosen :) |
by Sylvia
Nice collab. I like the format with the phrases between the verses. Very touching and sweet poem. |
by NightFlyer
Beautiful collaboration here. The stanzas really paint the picture of this romantic moment mingled with the quoted lines that add to the emotion. Well done! |
by The Queen
I think you both did a good job here with harmonious lines of consistent meter and stressed. I love it, such a sweet poems! I agree, you two should do this often! |
Connie & Tony: Truly, a very romantic poem capturing the beauty of such a night, a dream for each lover to build castles on one day, to enact the promises and pledges to fruition, one day. A truly touching and joyous poem to melt all those longing hearts in love. |