by Sherry Lynn Nov 20, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
While the heart breaks |
by Karla
I was reading your piece when two things crossed my mind: |
I believe most of us can relate to a feeling that nothing comes without strings attach . The middle of this poem reminds me of a favorite line from Bob dylan's song Sugar Baby Sometimes when we try to make things better for someone we end up making it a thousand times worse. |
by L
I ran into this poem once again, and I couldn't overlook Ms. Sunshine's comment. |
An addendum (unfortunately Janis's new magic EDIT button only works once): |
by RSJ
Nothing else I can add that haven't been said already, |