Uncover the Layers

by PinkyPrincess   Nov 20, 2011


What if you saw the real me?
It would be a tragedy to see
You'd have to carve the hardest part
and peel through all of the layers
until you reach my tainted heart.
The more you dig into me
you will realize I'm weaker
than the way I project myself.
You will know why I shield myself
from anything that can alter me.
When you find my hidden treasure
you will grasp that it is not worth much,
for it is nothing that money can buy,
just a hidden, rough stone that lost its shine.

As you peel through the layers of me,
remember to not expect to see much.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Matthew Schut

    Wow, such a deep poem about internal feelings! This made me really think about myself and "what makes me"! Such a deep, amazing poem my friend! Good work and THANK you for writing it!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Decayed

    Sarah, great piece. As if saying... do this and that to me, but eventually... what?

    Great hold on the tempo and the rhyming scheme was amazing. You showed lots of growing-weary emotions and I like it that way.

    Great, great:)

  • 13 years ago

    by RSJ

    Master piece
    it takes alot of skill in order to be able to write such a poem.
    thanks for the good read
    nominated.

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