Nominating (:

Wanting to get lost in the memories & not the future. Wishing that he was there right with you making new ones & not looking back wondering

5/5

The first line pulled the reader in, from there is was sheer enjoyment. Excellent

I would be forever be stuck there,
^
I don't think you meant to have two "be"s. :] Take either out and it'll be perfect.

I really like the vintage feel to this poem. It makes me think of the past. Lovely poem!

Cayce