This poem is amazing. You have done a great job with it and I even kind of envy your talent. Awesome job with the word choice and great descriptions for the emotions. 5/5 for sure

Everyone faces points in their life when they seem to be overcome with turmoil and seek to accept then endure, you have portrayed this very well in this poem!! Great job!! Be strong :)

So powerful. When I close my eyes, it feels as though the words just simply manifest themselves. I have such a deep connection with this.

Thank you.
Mos def 5/5