The 6th line
"I felt upset on what you did."
should be at* what you did.

9th line should be strange man not stranger.

11th you forgot I WAS* frightened

12th change praying to pray

15th make it why would or why'd

Now lol I like this it is a very good story or lesson. I asked my self was this really a dream? Keep it up maybe use the spell check more often to help with the errors I found. But again I like the story. I found the style kinda cute.