Broken Trust(acrostic)

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You did well with this hun,

I love the way the poem flows and each line really connects with the next.

Opening up your heart once again, hoping he doesn't
Kick you back down on the floor,
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I love these lines - very powerful.

I also agree with you that no relationship can work without trust

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You put so much trust into this person that you don't want them to hurt you again. You are taking a leap of faith going back to this person and you can see this in your last line when you mention "Taking a risk"

Awww this poem was so emotional, but I think it was also a reality check. I know I can relate to what you've expressed.. and that question "what if" is a very dreadful question that we ask a lot... but this poem was filled with emotion and sad, but at least you wrote a good poem despite the circumstances!

Well done hon :*

This poem gave way to whole host of different emotions. I am sure many people will relate and understand where you are coming from. Love is love but that said I have to agree what kind of a relationship can you have without trust!

Very well said

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This poem is proof that some risks aren't worth taking and it's definitely true that no relationship can last without trust. Another amazing poem that outlines the risks that come with taking a chance on someone who already ruined one.
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-Heather