Great job. This piece is amazing, it is short but it leaves an impression. It is quick but it shows how much a person can hurt you just because you are invisible. Sometimes silence causes us the worst pain.

Thank you for your comment on my poem and also thank you for adding me to your favorite poets that means quite a bit to me.

I'm going to help you with a few grammatical errors because that will make the poem more readable to some people and also that may help out with more people rating it.

"I thought I loved you,
but [that's] a lie.
You are someone special,
that I [can't] deny.
You made me feel,
like I finally belonged.
Yet you ignore me,
as I pass down the hall."

Okay, so it should be that's. Remove the comma from next to "that" in the third line and make it can't. That will make it more readable because a comma is a pause, so if you pause after you say that... It stops the flow. Just some helpful tips.

Keep writing; you have a very good start as to how a poem should be.

-Heather

I liked it, deffinatly worth a 5/5 in my book

Short but good. I can relate to it as many others will too

This poem is short and sweet. You have true talent and it shows. All you needed was a few simple words to tell everyone how you felt in your heart. It's quite amazing. Some people can write for ages and will never come up with the words to express your feelings and yet you managed to in just a few. Truly amazing.

Relatively regrettable.. It's just Life.

Nice , keep Going

Well done. You present your thoughts well in your work. It is good to have poetry to release the feelings that dwell, grow, and sometimes must be released onto the sheet. I do hope you continue to write.

Awwwww this is sooo sad darling

But it's still amazing how you wrote it babe

5/5 x

Very good for your first poem ...

few little tips for later ...

try and get more deeper emotions
To grab the reader by the heart

other then tht its a really good start keep writing

Been through that myself. it hurts but i promise give it time and things will get better :)