I Choose You

by Meme   Nov 22, 2011


You push me off a
mountain of possibilities,
only to watch me land
on the right choice.

You know I will choose
you every time, even if
you think that I deserve
someone else.

Yes, it's you now and
yesterday and tomorrow,
even forever, although
you don't believe in that.

I lost you so many times
before, but not anymore.
Push me off a mountain,
into the river, out of the train.

-Still,
I'll always come back and choose you.

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© Copyright 2011 by: gIrL
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  • 12 years ago

    by Skyfire

    The beginning and ending stanzas were my favorites. :) I loved the way you used punctuation at the end:

    -Still,
    I'll always come back and choose you.

    That's a lot of loyalty! Good job.

  • 12 years ago

    by RSJ

    Ifthis saying or shows anything
    it shows that not only are you loyal
    that your pure hearted and that inside out, it shows your inocence and it tells me that the person who is going to end up being ur soul mate is very lucky.
    god bless ud ear

  • 12 years ago

    by Matthew Schut

    This is a beautiful piece and I love how you expressed the writer's "love" for the other person; that no matter what happens, they will still want the other person!

    Good write my friend! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Excellent piece. I enjoyed each line, each emotion penned. Great flow and format.
    It was a delight to read

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    How amazing and exquisite that felt.
    One side note: "Yes, its you now and " --> it's

    Other than that, I love it. It felt smooth and so vivid..

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