This is exactly how i feel about my now ex boyfriend.

always him being the one regardless of what happens. actually brought tears to my eyes thinking about it. i love this :)

5/5

Awww I love this!!! It was such a delight to read... I love that you are trying to convince this person that you will always choose them no matter what, as if reassuring him. I really enjoyed it!

I love this stanza:

Yes, its you now and
yesterday and tomorrow,
even forever, although
you dont believe in that.

I also love the ending, I think it was perfect and couldn't have been written any better!

Well done sweetie :)

How amazing and exquisite that felt.
One side note: "Yes, its you now and " --> it's

Other than that, I love it. It felt smooth and so vivid..

Excellent piece. I enjoyed each line, each emotion penned. Great flow and format.
It was a delight to read

This is a beautiful piece and I love how you expressed the writer's "love" for the other person; that no matter what happens, they will still want the other person!

Good write my friend! :)

Ifthis saying or shows anything
it shows that not only are you loyal
that your pure hearted and that inside out, it shows your inocence and it tells me that the person who is going to end up being ur soul mate is very lucky.
god bless ud ear

The beginning and ending stanzas were my favorites. :) I loved the way you used punctuation at the end:

-Still,
I'll always come back and choose you.

That's a lot of loyalty! Good job.