Lu! |
I deeply enjoyed this piece and I kept going back to read it before commenting, because I'm really not sure how to describe the way I feel after reading. The description of this free-fall does sound akin to serenity...though I love in the end the aspect of this suicide either being sweetly forgotten, not appreciated by anyone but this season, or freely giving herself to the start of a life-giving time of Spring. Anyway, really imaginative thought that took somber tones as well as something new being made, a death possibly remembered in the next coming of season. Beautiful beautiful, I loved the format and the way it stands so profoundly, it haunts the reader. And the title was perfect too- the seasons change, it is all inevitable, and you pen with such passion upon entering the soul of this season and letting the reader witness it. Thanks for sharing, will probably end up reading again! |
by Lonely Rider
//Yet sadly |
by Melpomene
Lu,* |