by Freeze Tyler Nov 23, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
Velvet white room, |
by Decayed
The continuous flow was great. And some words hit home for me. Great job. |
I really like this! The title caught my attention, and I enjoyed reading your poem. The opening stanza, and I love your choice of descriptive words "velvet room" "heartless window" .. it foreshadowed the ending. |