by Twisted Heart Nov 23, 2011
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Deep within the very core |
A wonderful flow to this poem of yours. I thought it magnificent! I would suggest changing "bare" to "bear", but it could very well be that you mean to say "reveal" versus to say "possess". Hope we get to see some newer pieces from you soon! |
by Twyst
I loved this so much, you should definitely keep writing. |