A whisper beneath the moon

by The Poet Behind The Poems   Nov 24, 2011


Silence fills the air, nothing but
a cool breeze sailing across our skin
temptation, should I interrupt this moment
I stare into her soul and out comes a little whisper

"As long as the stars shine, I will
cherish you for the rest of my life, I will
make a sacred vow to keep you in my heart
take my hand and let forever begin, this is a promise".

"A whisper beneath the moon"

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  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    So romantic!
    it has wonderful imagery!!

    breathtaking! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by XxLastHopexX

    I'm again amazed at the emotions displayed in so little words.

  • 12 years ago

    by The Queen

    The title you've used indicates a romantic and mysterious picture, giving the poem a darker feeling..Love the repetition here, it felt more romantic :)

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Aww :)
    LOVE IT.

    I can see this playing out as you're staring at her then you whisper. You can feel the love as you promise forever. Short but beautiful :)

    Amazing as ALWAYS<3
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Awww this is such a sweet, romantic poem. I really enjoyed reading it. I love how you told this story, and you created beautiful imagery that made me imagine the entire poem. What a sweet whisper beneath the moon <3

    Great job!

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