It's beautiful, I really like the situation you set at the beginning, showing it's a moment full of importance simply for the fact that it's so quiet, nobody wants to say something wrong, the breeze that one is actually used to might cause one to have goosebumps in that moment because there is more behind it. The uncertainty whether what's happening is right or not by the question of interrupting the moment, yet the speaker decides not to, but keeps following his intuition and trying to find out what he wants to know, by looking at her soul, revealing the truth. The second stanza seems like you found what you looked for and are now able to completly devote yourself to her and live the love you feel.

Sooooo very romantic
A beautiful free flowing poem

The worsds you expressed, I could actually feel the cold breeze on my skin.

I like the idea that the time was perfect sitting in silence enjoying each others company. It's like you didn't want to ruin it.

But

Only saying something as romantic as that, would have made the night even better

An awesome poem

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You are so romantic, this just makes the heart beat a little faster/ Tender , romantic, great flow perfect wording.
Tony this is brilliant
Connie
xxx

Yet another amazing short poem.. Your poetry makes me so emotional.. It reminds me of what I once had... Words flowed through my body like an electrical surge!! 5/5!!

Silence fills the air, nothing but
a cool breeze sailing across our skin
temptation, should I interrupt this moment
I stare into her soul and out comes a little whisper

^ That's so chilling, especially with the style.

"As long as the stars shine, I will
cherish you for the rest of my life, I will
make a sacred vow to keep you in my heart
take my hand and let forever begin, this is a promise".

^ mmmm.. just quoting makes your piece alive, and oh, the words are so melodious.

"A whisper beneath the moon"

-- Great piece actually. One can get the adequate amount of emotions. Excellence.

Silence fills the air, nothing but
a cool breeze sailing across our skin
temptation, should I interrupt this moment
I stare into her soul and out comes a little whisper

The poem is self explained, nothing too complex, yet the simplicity is commendable.

^ The above stanza is simple and romantic. I like how the author mentions the glare of her soul reflecting a whisper. As the mood is set and the air is stirring love, the author does not intend on interrupting the subtle moment but holds still to listen to the soft whisper that echoes.

"As long as the stars shine, I will
cherish you for the rest of my life, I will
make a sacred vow to keep you in my heart
take my hand and let forever begin, this is a promise".

"A whisper beneath the moon"

^ This stanza is the reference of an individual conversing with the significant another, 1st and 2nd person in the play, where the author expresses his love to her, promising to cherish the bond they share and assures that her presence is eternal in his heart.

Very well written. Excellent job.

You have no idea of how good you are at writing love poems, you surprise me everytime I read a new one and I never get dissapointed :)

Love it, although it is short, sweet and to the point so I just have to say that all of it is my best part.

Love it, although it is short, sweet and to the point so I just have to say that all of it is my best part.

Love it, although it is short, sweet and to the point so I just have to say that all of it is my best part.

I loved this. I lost someone very close to me and this poems makes me think of her so much. Such a beautiful poem. Simple, very simple but it has a lot of emotion in it. Great job. -Nik

Awww this is such a sweet, romantic poem. I really enjoyed reading it. I love how you told this story, and you created beautiful imagery that made me imagine the entire poem. What a sweet whisper beneath the moon <3

Great job!

Aww :)
LOVE IT.

I can see this playing out as you're staring at her then you whisper. You can feel the love as you promise forever. Short but beautiful :)

Amazing as ALWAYS<3
5/5

The title you've used indicates a romantic and mysterious picture, giving the poem a darker feeling..Love the repetition here, it felt more romantic :)

I'm again amazed at the emotions displayed in so little words.

So romantic!
it has wonderful imagery!!

breathtaking! 5/5