Nothing

by Innocent Fairy   Nov 25, 2011


She is struck
Her heart stops
It breaks and
She falls
Can't hold back the tears
Falling to her knees
She can't breathe
She can't think
She is alone
She is cold
She sinks
Darkness consumes
God, she calls
But no answer
For she can't question
She feels dead
Empty
No feeling
Her tears just keep running
Her heart beats
But it's breaking
Frozen in time
She can't feel a thing
But her mind is racing
Everything is fuzzy
Hearing the sound of her heart
The sound of her tears falling
She is nothing
She feels nothing
She thinks nothing
She can't comprehend a thing
Empty inside pain
This feeling
She can't explain

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  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    I love the rawness of this poem.

    There is so much emotion felt with every line. You described so much of what she was feeling. So many people will be able to relate to this

    Well written

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Thanxs :D

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    I love this. exactly how i feel.

    you can see the tears pouring down feeling this
    5/5<3

  • 12 years ago

    by Bobby

    You are like wine just getting better and better each day longer

    It is a very well poem that gave me deep feelings of the words going into my soul

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    Wow!!!!! This poem was so deep. This is an outstanding write. I know what it's like to feel depressed and alone and you really echoed these sentiments in your poem. I think you conveyed an emotional breakdown really well

    5/5

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