A Rose for you

by aminath   Nov 25, 2011


Let me
Pluck out the mosses
Plant some roses
In your mind
Let me
Destroy the beast
Create a feast
In your conscience
Let me
Sprinkle some rain
Wrinkle out the pain
In your heart
Let me
Polish your dream
Nourish the beam
In your eyes
Let me
Harvest the fruit
Bring out the truth
Of your soul
Let me
Just let me
Be me

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  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    This is a marvelous poem; short and simple yet thought provoking. I loved how you used nature to incorporate feelings of love to a beloved. Vivid imagery and the flow is very smooth without any rough slope. Your wordings are so heart rendereing. I'm speechless, splendid piece. ;-)

  • 13 years ago

    by E Dacaf

    For some reason I just love the flow of this one. In my mind I could say this very clearly. And your use of simple words got the point across very easily. Great job.

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