Comments : The Cat is dead

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow, this is wow. Great job. I would say more, but I can't place my own words at the moment, sorry.

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    From start to finish, u worded this perfectly..the finish was great as well..5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    I agree with the two comments here. It was very interesting though. :) Kept my attentions.

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    A question echoed in my mind:
    Is the Cat dead, or is It alive?
    Every time I saw her,
    I'd think It alive
    But every distant message
    I'd assume It dead

    Well, That is a question that perhaps many wonder when they are in a relationship.
    But i just don't know why you were talking about a cat.
    Cozy Amour Thither? hehe.

    This is a great piece, first showing doubt until you finally realize that there was no love. At first it was just a routine that was making you think that it was love but as the time elapsed you realize that it wasn't.
    So separating from time to time is a great advice to make one realize if its love or not.

  • 12 years ago

    by Mattias Ostling

    The Cat is actually a reference to "Schrodinger's Cat", which is a mind experience where the Cat can be seen as both dead and alive at the same time, and only by opening the box will you find out which. This is then a metaphor for "more than friends", that is, are we more than friends, or are we not. At that point we could be more, and only by opening the box would I find out.

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    I agree with everyone above...!
    wordings excellent,start was good,mature writing and you were right about the ambiguity...
    I couldn't say much as everyone has mentioned what I wanted to write...
    Good work..:))

  • 12 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    The title and subtile them of the cat is dead inspired me to google the song lyris and an urban angle on this metaphor

    Not to be confused with dead were the person can be brought back to life or is living
    "but then the cat was dead, but not dead dead, just physically scared for life." - Lionman
    I love deep poetry and was born on the cusp of Leo under the sign of the virgin
    which means I will be analyzing this for a while

    well done