Winds of Decision (Collab with TJ Becker Arizona Eagle)

by Sylvia   Nov 25, 2011


Temptations blowing in the wind,
offerings from invisible entities
that beckon and whisper.

Dare I?

Replacing what was once; eradicating
all doubt that obstruct crystal vision.
Intoxicated by the fragrance of danger,
seduced by the gamble of tomorrow.

Paying the high price of forfeiture
if the choices are barren, or woven
with deception. Treacherous roads
hidden among meadows of reckoning.

Dare I?

Confusion, ambiguity obscuring coherent
thoughts. Cowardice freezing ability to
choose the path of redemption, where
shadows strive to hide the truth.

Discord raining in the air of the soul,
so many roads to choose from.
Stillness abounds as night blooms,
time passes, whispers quieted.

I dared!!

Please comment on his as well
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  • 11 years ago

    by Gary R Priester

    Sylvia, I just found you today.
    I love your work, although it could not be work' you must love what you do.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Absolute perfection~

    Replacing what was once; eradicating
    all doubt that obstruct crystal vision.
    Intoxicated by the fragrance of danger,
    seduced by the gamble of tomorrow.

    Reading it over and over...mind blowing! 5/6!

    Best,
    Ray

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Great piece u two..i dont know what to say, u hav me blown.

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    First, I would never have guessed this is a collaboration. It was VERY well-written and coherent, which made it a great collaboration to read! I love the story you told in this poem, it's so suspenseful and was fun to read. I like that you repeated the question "Dare I?" and that at the end you said "I dared!" .. I think that was important for the poem, and made it exciting for the reader. I have to add that the word choice was excellent.

    Great job to both of you! I really enjoyed it! =D

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    This is definitely a piece which talks to the mind and soul. I really love the great sense of wisdom in this. I think it's harmonious and thick by all means. Great thing, keeping in sync with the whole mood created. Excellent.

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