by Sunshine Nov 25, 2011
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
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If you breathe beneath my roots |
by RSJ
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This is Without a doubt one of your best poems ever, the way you aligned these metaphors was very creative to say at the least, captivating, mismorizig and very enjoyable read nominated no bet |
by Boy
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I loved it. the words and the comibantion of words fits to another. good solid poem |
by nouriguess
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OH MY I AM NOW ABLE TO EDIT MY COMMENT LALALALLALA |
by Meena Krish
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Very different and very interesting! Each line I must say paints vivid images and I also like the use of words as well as the flow of the poem. Simply well written! |
by Decayed
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EX cellent, nana! |