This is the most original poem I have ever seen seeming to be written for an ex

A winner, Sunshine, a winner dear, you know am unable to leave a long comment but nominated next week. I love you.

EX cellent, nana!
I was really EX cited to read the piece.
It felt so... EX quisitely awesome with your never ending vivid metaphors, and your way of writing.

oh my, my, my.. what a way.

"coffee was never my cup of tea...anyway!"

^ I was like, damn it. This is... so originally penned.

I thought the first stanza was ehhh... good by all means.

But the second,, LOOOVE.

And the third: WOAHHHHH! Klashikov, dear!!

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I like trying new things outside my bubble,

^ It's a great summing up to what you have somehow pointed your fingers at. Your EX was not of your thang' but you tried to try'em? mm.. great imagery.

but not when I'm about to ex plode with
my inner longings and suppressed fears
there under the cap of a champagne bottle,

^ I love this image too. The pressure inside a champagne bottle because of compression is immense! And playing on such an image feels great.

Ex...plosive

^ ALL those EX's just emphasize your tone, as if you want to grab his attention again, and the overuse of EX words assures that. !!!
the play on them is great.

EX tremely EX cellent!! :)

nominated, no bet.

Very different and very interesting! Each line I must say paints vivid images and I also like the use of words as well as the flow of the poem. Simply well written!

OH MY I AM NOW ABLE TO EDIT MY COMMENT LALALALLALA

I loved it. the words and the comibantion of words fits to another. good solid poem

This is Without a doubt one of your best poems ever, the way you aligned these metaphors was very creative to say at the least, captivating, mismorizig and very enjoyable read nominated no bet