The Angel of Death

by xoxShorteexox   Nov 25, 2011


She wraps me in her cold embrace,
placing a kiss upon my lips so soft,
losing all sense of the present reality,
falling down into darkness with no escape.

The touch of her eternally cold embrace,
put me on the verge of falling harder,
trying to see the bottom of darkness,
to fall deeper into the nothingness below.

She drags me further down into the dark,
my eyelids start fluttering closed forever,
her eternal embrace leaves me breathless,
as I scream without any answering calls.

As I hit what seem to be the bottom of it all,
hands reaching into the darkness for anything,
with a bony hand powerfully gripping mine,
the vision of darkness enfolds me forever.

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  • 13 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    As I hit what seem to the bottom of it all,
    ^
    I think you meant "As I hit what seems, the bottom of it all," or maybe "As I hit what seems to be the bottom of it all." Although I think the first suggestion would be a better option. :]

    I liked how it didn't rhyme even though I was expecting it to. You had nice word choice throughout the poem, and in the first line I could almost feel the cold embrace. But that could be because it's freezing here and I'm cold. Haha. But nevertheless, it was a lovely poem.

    Great job!

    Cayce

  • 13 years ago

    by anonymous

    I love it! 100/100