This poem truly says so much in such a little piece, my goodness. I pulled a few different interpretations out of this, but my favorite is taking it for what it says. The literal sense of this piece is just so strong. The constant fluidity of wandering, being lost in your life, hitting that rough patch, stuck in your dreams and unable to move forward until your calling comes. I Love it!

You say so much with so few words. The emotion in this is astounding!

I especially liked the last stanza. Well done!

You're a really amazing poetess. That's why you're on my fave list :)

Love this piece, love it.

Vividness is your thang' MaryAnne.

Bravo :]]
even a short poem like this is amazing<3

5/5