Pieces of Nothing

by jamelle   Nov 26, 2011


PIECES OF NOTHING

His name is what i always heard
He is a person I used to uttered-

He teach me live, to the world of creation;
and give me inspiration
He give me lots of advices
He understand me a lots.

He always make me smile and happy
Make my life lively and worthy!

He is my everything
But he broke me into PIECES OF NOTHING----

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  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    The reason i gave it a 5 is because it has agood content despite the grammatical errors. i think i understand English is not your mother tongue. Try editing your poems thoroughly. Hope am not being harsh.

    i really loved how you began, how you introduce us to him.
    the ending was also wonderful.

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