by Areeba Nov 26, 2011
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Do not care what this world says |
by Omar
Great job. It doesn't seem like it was your first poem. |
by Scarlet Letter
Nice |
by Amy
I'm so glad I read this! You have given me confidants in myself. This was such an inspiring poem! My "friend" always brought me down and made me feel bad about myself :| I love it good write! Would you mind having a look at my poems? 5/5 |
by White Orchid
I liked how you expressed how to be yourself and not worry about blending in with people. So I thought this was a good write. |
by Xanthe
I agree with Lofallenve, this is inspirational. I love the message and simple word choice. But the only thing I don't really like is that it's quite emotionless. Sorry, not trying to be mean, but a little emotion wouldn't hurt, right? The writer is giving advice, but as a reader, I don't want to listen to that advice because the persona is lacking emotion. 'Never lose your individuality'---I like this, but I'm not too crazy about the repetition. |