For a first one this one is pretty good. :) I liked it, quite inspirational and makes one feel good about themselves.

These insane people
They just bark
You just rock, let them bark

I like that stanza. Reminds me of the saying "barking mad."

I think you have potential to grow into a great poet. :) Keep up the work! =)

Thanxx Lofallenve.......your words helped me in lifting up my confident while writing.........thank u (^.^)

Great work..i inspired by you poem..keep inspiring people...i rate it 5/5

I agree with Lofallenve, this is inspirational. I love the message and simple word choice. But the only thing I don't really like is that it's quite emotionless. Sorry, not trying to be mean, but a little emotion wouldn't hurt, right? The writer is giving advice, but as a reader, I don't want to listen to that advice because the persona is lacking emotion. 'Never lose your individuality'---I like this, but I'm not too crazy about the repetition.
Overall, a really nice write. Keep writing 'cause I see a lot of potential here.
-X

I liked how you expressed how to be yourself and not worry about blending in with people. So I thought this was a good write.

I'm so glad I read this! You have given me confidants in myself. This was such an inspiring poem! My "friend" always brought me down and made me feel bad about myself :| I love it good write! Would you mind having a look at my poems? 5/5

Nice

Great job. It doesn't seem like it was your first poem.
You write poems like you were doing it for year.
Keep it up :)