This poem really speaks to the heart of the reader. Your words really help the reader to build up a picture in their head. I loved this from start to end.

5/5

Hey hun,

You really enabled me to picture a beautiful image here.

The romantic flow and use of words is wonderful.

I would love
to awake in the morning
and see your face
awake from a kiss
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Right then I imagined my own husband kissing me in the morning to wake me up, it's the sweetest feeling in the world...

unless you haven't had enough sleep then it's another story lol

Well done babe,

x

All I can say is beautiful.
the longing the romance , tendered in need is a brilliant poem of emotions.