Comments : Dont know anymore..

  • 12 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    Wow. Pulled me in at the beginning.

    no, never...
    never have I been Juliet
    nor will someone ever spray
    petals on my chest, for
    I'm nothing but a parentless
    dream, I am a sunless
    reverie...

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    Has to be my favorite stanza. For me, I find this poem very relateable, and just the emotions, I could feel them. Keep writing, you are amazing. :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Kelsie

    Thanks(: