by Jack Nightengale Nov 27, 2011
category :
Life, society /
patriotism
Deep in the desert, dead and cast away |
Firstly, I like the simplicity of the title. I think it is really fitting for the piece as well as draws the reader in - if they are like me, they would definitely want to know what it could entail. Also I believe that the simplicity of the title is a nice and effective contrast to the content, as the poem itself is more complex particularly in detail. |
Good sir, there is more imagination to what you just read. The poem is based off of a song named Iron by the artist wood kid. Once again, the mind needs to be more open than what you just read. |
by christopher
Man you seriously need thearpy look for the good in this life |
I saw what thousands of men saw, and that put a chill down my back. It breaks the heart. but this is touching and seering. |
by Decayed
Honestly, if you want... I can never get over unnecessary 'the's .. |