by Sherry Lynn
As I read this, I can only say that it ripped my heart out. |
You brought this full circle with the deep heartfelt |
by Whatever works
This does sound like a warrior |
by Decayed
Honestly, if you want... I can never get over unnecessary 'the's .. |
I saw what thousands of men saw, and that put a chill down my back. It breaks the heart. but this is touching and seering. |
by christopher
Man you seriously need thearpy look for the good in this life |
Good sir, there is more imagination to what you just read. The poem is based off of a song named Iron by the artist wood kid. Once again, the mind needs to be more open than what you just read. |
Firstly, I like the simplicity of the title. I think it is really fitting for the piece as well as draws the reader in - if they are like me, they would definitely want to know what it could entail. Also I believe that the simplicity of the title is a nice and effective contrast to the content, as the poem itself is more complex particularly in detail. |