Love that died

by Daniela   Jun 24, 2004


A rose which once stood tall,
Has withered, and begun to fall,
A dove that once could freely fly,
Lost it's wings and began to die,
A candle that once shone bright,
Burned out, no longer in sight,
A child that would forever grin,
Sentenced to life for committing a sin,
A beautiful child, happy and fufilled,
Abused, hurt, unloved and killed,
This is how i compare what we had,
Our love has died, and now I'm sad,
All these tears which i have cried,
all because of our love- that died.

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  • 20 years ago

    by LiL One

    I think this poem is written beautifully...how you use ur words, its amazing...keep it up...Much Love, LiL One

  • 20 years ago

    by Million Tears

    hey nice pome i like how you compared love to different things

  • 20 years ago

    by Nicole Kinder

    this was very well written and expressed, i loved all the metaphors you used to symbolize love dying. This was a beautiful poem, cant wait to see your next one! keep up the good work!